For my midterm the main feedback I got had to with playing with roof lines and experimenting with focal points more. They mentioned looking at Zaha Hadids work, which I assumed was her early work in drawings and paintings of perspectives.
The site plan which proved to be most successful among the guest reviewers was the one which created a path with slightly offset linear clusters. I was urged to look back at how I created a path with perspectives in my earlier stages and use that in my current stage for making aggregations. I was also told to take my definitions of the words, similar and different, and take them further apart.
Hathaway Section - Spring 2020 